Welcome to the Saturday Spankings Bloghop! If you’re a reader who likes stories with with a touch of corporal punishment, this is the hop for you. We welcome readers comments, in fact we hunger for them, so don’t be stingy when you’re visiting. Authors thrive on encouragement.
This Saturday’s excerpt comes from Elizabeth’s Destiny. We join Maxwell and Beth as he is carrying out an order to discipline the new slave girl. He was told to whip her but simply can’t bring himself to do so much harm to the woman he has come to care for. He has decided to substitute a very hard paddling for the whipping, hoping that the dark bruises will mollify his boss. Maxwell has her on the brink of ecstasy mixing pleasure with the sting of the paddle, wanting the pleasure to make the punishment easier for her to take.
Each blow brought Beth closer to bliss, and Maxwell timed them so she needed each strike. Without the paddle, without the pain, there was no pressure on her clit. The blaze within matched the one on her bottom, and Beth was too lost to feel the difference. She moved into them, rising to meet the sting of the paddle, needing, craving, wanting, and demanding. So close, so close.
“Please, please, please, please.”
“That’s a girl, come on baby, come on Beth, just let it happen. Cum for me Beth, let yourself go.”
Get hopping to the rest of the spankers to see what they’ve got going on.
Such perfect, simple dialogue! Love it!
Thank you. I appreciate your saying so. Sometimes a lot of words aren’t needed.
Mmm. Embrace the pain, enjoy your submission. Loved this little snippet – will she manage to do the business though? ~grin~
I’m not sure she has a choice. He’s an expert at causing the body to be a riot of sensations. Thank you for coming by and commenting.
oh that was absolutely perfect, Jolynn! How unfair (to myself) to read your snippet after I’d started drinking an energy drink- there is so not the time for the cold shower I now need 😀
Well perhaps sans cold shower your muse will whisper naughty nasties in your ear and make your day brighter
Very hot Jolynn and I love the cover. I think she’s really beautiful.
Thank you. I liked her from the start because she didn’t look too modern, the only thing was that huge green ring! I ended up writing it into the story so it wasn’t sticking out like a sore thumb when I looked at it.
Don’t think the boss will be pleased, a whipping is so very different from a sound spanking – but I believe he has Beth’s vote.
Yes it certainly is, and this will definitely set off red flags with his boss. We do have to have a villain though. It makes for better drama. Thanks for your comment.
Not sure his boss will be satisfied, but it sounds as if the both of them will be happy
Happy for now, yes. His boss is another matter though. This will definitely cause some problems.
Very evocative snippet. I liked the related post too
Thank you. I hope you stop by to visit to read more posts. Thanks for the comment.
He has certainly pleased Beth, but I can’t help wonder if his boss will be satisfied. Hot 8.
And therein lies the plot twists and turns. A happy Beth and Maxwell can’t equal a happy boss. Thanks for your comment.