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5 Star Reviews For Taken!!

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5.0 out of 5 stars Beneath the shadows of Evil !!! mind blowing good!! March 6, 2013 By Lesa Format:Kindle Edition This is one awesome read I started this book at bedtime and didn’t want to fall asleep it was way to interesting but sleep claim me. First thing at morning put on my coffee and read the day away family had to fend for themselves. This book had me on edge I went from pissed to awed. I’m saying read this book read reviews before I wrote mine come on lower stars because of some mistakes really? Well everyone has an opinion I never thought less of incredible talent. This book is right up there with one of my Favorite Authors C.Feehan Loved it. Dear Author I’m a total fan of your work. One hell of a read I hated when it was over I need more. Thank you Loved […]

The Nightmare of Shadows 2 comments

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What does one do when the story they have written is a whopping 450,000 words? Many have said that books shouldn’t be over 100,000 words, especially in this day and age of the ADHD society. The paperback version will be too costly to print, and the e-book reader doesn’t want to invest the time, or so they say. So here I am left attempting to split apart a story that has a lot of small plot lines woven into the big picture and finding it a nightmare to cut it up. If I follow the wisdom of those with experience and those in the business, I should chop it into four parts, but those parts aren’t clearly evident. Each sub plot is too intricately imbedded. Will my readers scream if too many of the small plot lines are left dangling? I am left with is cliffhangers ever where I look. The obvious break line […]